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http://theladysilver.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] theladysilver.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] yunnieberry 2017-02-16 01:45 am (UTC)

Chelllsss! This isn't slight angst bb! It's more than slight! I can feel Jaejoong's emotions seeping through my screen. I got teary eyed when I read this. You can feel his pain. You can only imagine the many nights that he had cried himself to sleep, wanting to have Yunho right beside him.

I like that you started to explore more outside your fluffy onsehots. I must say, I'm liking the results so far. I love how still maintained your signature cheese at towards the end. This fic is as romantic as your previous ones. Though it's angsty one, still you can feel the romance here.

I'd very much would like to read Yunho's POV. Preferably for both oneshots. Hehehehe. I would love to know his thoughts and emotions for both.

This is good chels! Hope you'll get to make the Yunho POV versions for the oneshots. Hehehe. Yes, I'm suggesting a POV from Yunho not just for this oneshot, but for the other one as well. XD Hahaha!

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